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Write about something you learned about stars. Here are some hints:
Please write at least three sentences sharing what you’ve learned.
How are stars made?Do they all stay the same or do they all change?
I learn that star is just gas in the space. I known that sun is a big gas ball that is a star in space that warm R planet.
I know that stars are made out of gas.I also know that some stars create constellation.I also know that one form the stars have is being red giants.
The sun and stars have to blow up into pieces.Stars are same by moving the same amount of speed.
Some thing about the big yellow sun it is a big gases that is one thing the other one is it is a star.
The thing I know about stars is that some stars are made from different gas.I also know that sun and stars are the same by that they are made from gas.
Actually stars aren’t all the same,some are different colors and shapes. They also don’t stay in the same place,they move around quickly but we are so far away that we can’t see them move.
I know that the sun is also a star.I also know that suns explode and then they reform.
Stars are a big ball of gas. Stars are not the same they look like they are all the same but they are not. They could be lop sided or they could be lumpy but they are not all the same. Stars some times blow up but the gas that blew up form more stars=) By:~Abilene D.~
Ive learned that you can go outer space but not to close to the star and look at it.I learned that stars are made out of dustes and gases.
What i know about stars is that it is made from gas.And what i know that what is sun and stars the same. it is the same other they are the same.
The sun is related to the stars because the sun is a ordinary star.The sun is also related to the stars because stars are round and the sun is also round.
the sun is a bunch of stares put together. Some stars are shiner then the other. Some of the stares are put into pictures. when stares are old they explode.
I now about stars becouse stars are cool .and i like stars becouse stars are the best stars in this earth.
The sun is related to stars because they are made out of the same thing.Also it is because the sun is closer to us, then other stars. That is why other stars are fainter.
A star is a hot glowing ball of gas.Also are sun is a star.But it’s not an ordinary star it doesn’t have other stars surrounding it.
The sun is a big glowing gas .It will explod When it gets old
The stars are not the same. Star are hot like the sun.
1.Some of the stars are the same.
3.stars do not change but they usually grow up.
well i now that stars are very hot you can Bern and stars look like they are small but they are big.
The thing I know about stars is that they are made of big balls called gases. They are also made out of one star.Lots of stars create one planet.
1. Where are my parents from?
2. When do my parents married ?
3. When do my parents have babies?
4. When was I born?
5. When were my grandparents born?
Good job, Ah, these are some good questions. On Question 2, you want to say “When were my parents married” because it is past tense. ~ Ms. Agus