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This week you should reflect on what you know about or have experienced with competition. Write three complete, grammatical sentences sharing either what you know about competition, or what you have experienced with competition.
Competition is when people compete to win a game, sport, or contest. People compete to win. Sometimes it takes teamwork to win.
Excellent work on this! You define and elaborate very well in this!–Ms. Mercer
People make a lot of competition to win all games. They will not play easy. They will what to win. They what to be the bset one, to all games. Some competition is not easy to play.
Kawm, good job. You make a competition or competitions. You are right, some are not easy to play.–Ms. Mercer
Competition is like against somebody and winning trophies.For example you could play all kinds of games.Competition is like entering a contest and winning some trophies.Competition is like winning some trophies and entering contest like racing and other kind of sports.
This is a little repetitive. Are you restating the part about trophies to make a point? Maybe you should have one idea first, the entering, and winning trophies, then examples like games, and racing, and sports in the next two sentences?–Ms. Mercer
The compeitition was easy because we try our best
to win the 6th.
They won 2 time but we won 3 time.
We have the compeitition in summer school
and it fun in summer school.
The dancing compeitition we are not the best but we are
the sis that dance alot.
At home I were teaching my little sis dance in Hmong
New Year, but i dont think so
They won 2 times and you won 3 times? I were should be I was. This is all very interesting. I’d love to see pictures of you and your sisters dancing at New Year.–Ms. Mercer
Competition is when you compete against someone.I had a competition with my brother.I won that is what I think competition is.
Congratulations, what kind of competition was it? –Ms. Mercer
I use to jump rope against some people. Usually I would win. Have you ever been in anything before Ms.Mercer.
I used to be the girls champion at wall ball (boys and girls played separately at wall ball back then). I was really good at that.–Ms. Mercer