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Yosemite Speaks

May19

Well done creating Wordle images and commenting on at least two of your classmate’s poems.  If you have not yet commented, please do that first.  Also, go back to your poem and view what others have written and respond to them where it is appropriate.

I’ll admit that I had trouble uploading our Flickr images to a digital book, so that is still a work in progress.  The good news is that we have a class gmail account and Flickr account. Here is the information:

2013iesib@gmail.com    password: thundergodz (I added the “z” so it matches our Flickr account. 

http://www.flickr.com/  at the top you will see the “sign in” button; use your gmail username and password to access our photos.  Once you see our photostream,  you can upload photos and create “sets” of photos. So far I have created two sets (Victor’s photos and Coey’s photos).  Please upload your photos.

For those of you who attended the Yosemite Field Trip, I would like you to write a brief autobiographical incident (describe an important moment of self discovery and awareness).  Write about one experience and describe your observations, thoughts, and feelings.  Compare your experience using figurative language and personification. 

For those of you who remained in Sacramento,  I want you to review our field trip photos on Flickr, select one image to write about, and write yourself into one of the settings.  Imagine your thoughts, feelings, and observations, and create a fictional autobiography.  Compare your fictional experience by using figurative language and personification.

If you still have time, create a Bubblr image like the one I created using an image of the Yosemite Valley http://www.pimpampum.net/bubblr/?id=29935 

Be sure to read John Muir’s “Sierra Thunderstorms” for an excellent example of figurative language and personification. Pay close attention to the “Journey of the Raindrop” on the second page.  It’s very cool.

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3 Comments to

“Yosemite Speaks”

  1. May 22nd, 2011 at 9:39 pm       jccoey Says:

    Joseph,

    Good one! I like your Bubblr; it made me laugh LOL.

    Coey


  2. May 19th, 2011 at 4:33 pm       joseph Yang Says:

    An Important Moment of Self Discovery and Awareness

    At Yosemite on Sunday in the morning, it was snowing over night and it was still snowing. I wandered around into a small open field where no trees were around. I looked up at the tree with snow and to me, I thought it looked beautiful. I stared at the tree for awhile and took a picture. The tree looked so different when it snows on it. Afterwards, there was nothing going on so I played snow ball fight for a while and then, I made a snow angel although it didn’t look much like one. Then, I buried Chai in the snow and took pictures.
    Although the moment only lasted for a while, it was fun to play in the snow and the trip to Yosemite was a good experience although we had to come home early. I’m sure if we stayed at Yosemite longer, I would have had more fun and I would have gotten to see the beauty of Yosemite.




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