Finally, take one of your topic sentences, your sentences about the three rights you believe we should have (including details), and another of your topic sentences as a conclusion, and send them to me as a comment. This should make a 7-8 sentence paragraph.
Today, I want you to write four topic sentences for the rights you think everyone should have. The sentences should be:
1. Simple Declarative;
Example: There are some rights everyone should have.
2. Number Statement;
Example: Here are some among the many rights we should all have.
3. Question;
Example: Why are some rights so important?
4. Situation/Stance;
Example: If we are to be free, there are some rights that must be guaranteed.
Please Reply to your last comment to send this to me.
Audience: staff
Keywords: basic rights 3
1. The first right is to be able to have freedom of expresion
2. The next right is that we should be able to have freedom of dress
3. The last right is we should be able to driv
topic 3 right
The first right I think everyone should have is to have
Topic:Inalienable Rights
Audience:Ms.Mercer
Keywords: What important words are in the prompt. What is the subject? How much should you write? What format should your response be in?
1. The first right I think everyone should have is the right of free choice.
2.The next right I think all people should have is the right of defence.
3.The last right I think people should is the right of shelter.
Topic:Inalienable Rights
Audience:Ms.Mercer
Keywords: What important words are in the prompt. What is the subject? How much should you write? What format should your response be in?
1. The first right I think everyone should have is the right of free choice.
2.The next right I think all people should have is the right of defence.
3.The last right I think people should is the right of shelter.
Topic:Inalienable Rights
Audience:Ms.Mercer
Keywords: What important words are in the prompt. What is the subject? How much should you write? What format should your response be in?
1. The first right I think everyone should have is the right of free choice all of the above freedom.
2.The next right I think all people should have is the right of defence.
3.The last right I think people should is the right of shelter.
What do people need rights? The first right I think everyone should have is the right of free choice. The next right I think all people should have is the right of defense. The last right I think people should is the right of shelter. Do we actually need rights/laws around the world?
Very good! Since you have enough time, can you add some more details after each of the sentences about rights? Thanks!
Topic: having rights
Audience: teachers
Keywords: rights
1. The first right I think everyone should have is to put any shirt on.
2. The next right I think we should all have is to have more free time.
3. The last right all people should have is go any place.
To have the rights you have to do all kinds of stuff.Rights isn’t anything it is amazing.Also it is lots of stuff for pore people.
Topic: What the topic is
Audience: Who are your writing to
Keywords: What important words are in the prompt. What is the subject? How much should you write? What format should your response be in?
I think that everyone should have the right not to be abuse by just because of there skin color.And kids should have the right to be free.Also we should have a right for school that way people can go when they want go to school only if in emergency.
Topic: people rights
Audience: everyone
Keywords: write,prompt,peoples rights
1.I think that everyone should have the right not to be abuse by just because of there skin color. example:people some people would kill a person for being a different race.
2.And kids should have the right to be free. ex:ids under 18 shouldn’t have to work.
3.Also we should have a right for school that way people can go when they want go to school only if in emergency.ex: some people lie about them having to go to the hospital.
1.everyone should have the right of freedom and the kids right of freedom too.
2.there are many rights people should have and i think that all of them are fair.
4.like the right to learn to read and write also to do math, history,and art.
Topic: our rights to be a kid
Audience: staff
Keywords: 3 basic rights
1. The first right I think everyone should have is…to be able to have fun.
2. The next right I think we should all have is…being spoiled
3. The last right all people should have is…not have chores
our rights to be a kid
Everyone should have rights because without them we will be out of control.
The first right I think everyone should have is…to be able to have fun.Everyone should be able to have fun because everyone should get loose once and a while.
The next right I think we should all have is…being spoiled.The reason that I think everyone should be spoiled because we at least need one day to be pampered.
The last right all people should have is…not have chores.We don’t need to do chores because hey are hard. These are some rights that we all should have.
Take out the “…”, the sentences need to flow together, not be on separate lines. Add a conclusion.
Topic; three rights people can have
Audience: staff
Keywords: What important words are in the prompt. What is the subject? How much should you write? What format should your response be in?
1. The first right I think everyone should have is driving
2. The next right I think we should all have is playing video games any time
3. The last right all people should have is driving mini motor bikes in the street
Topic:Rights
Audicence:Who are your writing to
Keywords: What important words are in the prompt. What is the subject? How much should you write? What format should your response be in?
1. The first right I think everyone should have is…to play sports
2. The next right I think we should all have is to a cell phone…
3. The last right all people should have is to…were what ever we want to were in school:
topic:my rights
audience:computer teacher
keyword:rights,three,inalienable
rights:i have inalienable rights to my mouth
rights:i have inalienable rights to stay with my family.
rights:i have inalienable rights to my freedom.
topic :three rights
audience:Mrs.mercer
keyword:three ,right, inalienable
I think one right that is inalienable is the right to play . the other right is the right to be happy . the next right i think is inalienable is the freedom of speach.
Topic: our rights to be a kid
Audience: staff,teachers
Keywords: 3 basic rights
1. The first right is kids should be able to have a car.
2. The next right is to be spoiled with everything.
3. The last right is for all people to have big houses.
Topic:RIGHT
Audience:staff
Keywords: BASIC inalienable three rights
1. We should have cells phones.
2. we need ipod touch so we could listen to music.
3. All of us need money to buy things.
Topic:RIGHT
Audience:staff
Keywords: BASIC inalienable three rights
1. We should have cells phones.
So we could call our friends an our family.
2. we need ipod touch so we could listen to music.
we could listen too music if we get bored or listen too it when you do your homework.
3. All of us need money to buy things.
we need too buy clothes,shoes,games,and lots of thing.
simple
I think we should have these right because it is important.
question
what right do you think we need?
number:
These are the 3 rights I think we should have.
stance:
although some people feel that right is aren’t important,I that rights are important.
Topic:begging rights
Auidence:Ms.Mercer
Keywords:rights,tree,inalienable
Ihave the right to tell my brother and sister what to do.Ihave the right tocontrol my self.I have the right to do what i want to do.
There should be some rights for everyone.
There are so many reasons to have rights.
Why are rights so important?
If we should be free,we should freedom.
EmmaG says:
November 15, 2010 at 11:28 am
Topic:begging rights
Auidence:Ms.Mercer
Keywords:rights,tree,inalienable
I have the right to tell my brother and sister what to do.I have the right to control my self.I have the right to do what i want to do.
This is not a paragraph. Add a topic sentence and conclusion at the beginning and end of your writing. Please add detail sentences after each of three sentences. Make sure to capitalize “i”.
Topic: rights that are inalienable
Audience: Mrs.mercer and class
Keywords: inalienable,right,three,basic
1.The first right i think people should have is the right to have a family.
2.The second right is that Mexican people should have the right to be in California. 3.The third right is that all people should be nice to each other.
These are 3 reasons why rights are important. The first right i think people should have is the right to have a family because its not fair 4 them to not have a mom or dad.
The second right is that Mexican people should have the right to be in California because there’s better opportunity for them to have a better life.The third right is that all people should be nice to each other because if they’re not nice to each other there would be lots of fights in this state.Well those were 3 reasons why rights are important in California.
Overall, good job. You need to have the sentences flow together, not listed on separate lines. You need to NOT use numbers for words like for, and please write out “3” as “three” and capitalize “i”.
These are 3 reasons why rights are important. The first right i think people should have is the right to have a family because its not fair 4 them to not have a mom or dad.
The second right is that Mexican people should have the right to be in California because there’s better opportunity for them to have a better life.The third right is that all people should be nice to each other because if they’re not nice to each other there would be lots of fights in this state.Well those were 3 reasons why rights are important in Californi
I need to see you and Juan Carlos
Topic:wrights
Audience: teacher,staff,students
Keywords: important, rights
1. The first right I think everyone should have is skateboarding with getting pulled over by a security.
2. The next right I think we should all have is doing what you like.
3. The last right all people should have is expressing your feelings
Topic:wrights
Audience: teacher,staff,students
Keywords: important, rights
1. The first right I think everyone should have is skateboarding with getting pulled over by a security.
2. The next right I think we should all have is doing what you like.
3. The last right all people should have is expressing your feelings
1. The first right I think everyone should have is skateboarding with getting pulled over by a security.
skateboarding is not illegal
2. The next right I think we should all have is doing what you like.
like skateboarding in the back of walmart
3. The last right all people should have is expressing your feelings
1.these are the wrights everyone should have.2.these are some wrights you should have.3.wrights you should have.4.
Topic: Rights
Audience: Ms.Mercer
Keywords:3 right.
1. The first right I think everyone should have is to vote.
2. The next right I think we should all have is…to work.
3. The last right all people should have is…to not do what they wont.
That first right people should have is to vote.1 first right is to have freedom .WAY people cat not have olot of rights.A exeple is some people want freedom.
I think we should have 3 important right . The first right I think everyone should have is to vote. The next right I think we should all have is…to work. The last right all people should have is…to not do what they wont.I think that everybody should have rights.
Good job. Replace the number “3” with the word “three”. Add some detail sentences after each right.
Please take out the “…” and have a space after each period.
Topic:3 rights people should have
Audience:teacher staff students people
Keywords:basic 3 rights inalienable
1. people need a family
2.we need a phone
3. money
1. people need a family
and a house.
2.we need a phone
for emergencies to call your parents.
3. money so you can buy
stuff.
1 one right i think we should have is a phone.
2 anther right i think we should have is a family.
3 my 3 right i think we should have is a house.
4 my 4 right is we should all have the freedom to go to school
Topic: basic right
Audience: Ms.Mercer,student,staff
Keywords: Three right and inalienable
1. The first right I think everyone should have is to do what people like.
2. The next right I think we should all have is to keep there own taxes.
3. The last right all people should have is to have there own job.
Topic: basic right
Audience: Ms.Mercer,student,staff
Keywords: Three right and inalienable
1. The first right I think everyone should have is to do what people like.People do not want to do work that they do not want to do it.
2. The next right I think we should not have uniforms. The uniforms are ugly and do not have cool picture.
3. The last right all people should have is to have there own job that they want to do.There own job is hard for the people that do not want to do it.
1. People should have their own basic rights.
2. People should have 3 basic right.
3.Why people from another country should not have there own right.
4. People should have there own basic right because they need there basic right.
People should have their own basic rights. The first right I think everyone should have is to do what people like.People do not want to do work that they do not want to do it.
The next right I think we should not have uniforms. The uniforms are ugly and do not have cool picture.
The last right all people should have is to have there own job that they want to do.There own job is hard for the people that do not want to do it. People should have there own basic right because they need there basic right.
Good job Nang
Topic: right
Audience: Who are your writing to
Keywords: What important words are in the prompt. What is the subject? How much should you write? What format should your response be in?
1. The first right I think everyone showld have the right to have cellphones 2.The next right to have sport. 3.the last right is to have more recess balls
Topic:basic rights
Audience:Ms.Mercer
Keywords:inalienable,three,basic rights
The first right I think everyone should have is letting people cross the borders.
The next right I think we should all have is having less homework.
The last right all people should have is being treated with respected.
Topic: basic right
Audience: teacher,staff,student.
Keywords: three right,and important
1. The first right I think everyone should have is people should be rich.
2. The next right I think we should all have is money.
3. The last right all people should have is car.
1. The first right I think everyone should have is people should be rich
to buy stuff like toy, food, and car to drive to school and work.
2. The next right I think we should all have is money to pay your home bill.
3. The last right all people should have is car to drive to work, store and school.
I think people shuold have money, car, and house .
Some people is so important because they had no money, house, and no food to eat.So they are so important to us.
There are the three rights. The first right I think everyone should have is people should be rich. The next right I think we should all have is money. The last right all people should have is car.I think the three right is the best.
Topic: Rights
Audience: Ms.Mercer
Keywords: inalienable,basic rights,taken away
1. The first right I think everyone should have is that we can sleep late.
2. The next right I think we should all have is…that we should play video games.
3. The last right all people should have is…that come late to school.
Topic: Rights
Audience: Ms.Mercer
Keywords: inalienable,basic rights,taken away
1. The first right I think everyone should have is that we can sleep late or early.
2. The next right I think we should all have is…that we should play video games,but not all the time.
3. The last right all people should have is…school should start late.
Topic:rights
Audience;staff mrs.mercer
Keywords; 3 rights ,basic inlaible
1. The first right is we have the right to vote and elect a canadent.
2. The next right is we should be able to wear any kind of clothes to school.
3. The last right is we should all have a right that all mexicans should have the right to be in california
1. The first right is we have the right to vote and elect a canadent.we should be able to vote because kids sometimes make better options.
2. The next right is we should be able to wear any kind of clothes to school.we should wear any clothes to school because or clothes is cooler.
3. The last right is we should all have a right that all mexicans should have the right to be in california.we should be able to live here because we should also need better opertunities.
These are some rights that people and kids should have. these are three rights i think [people and kids should have. There are so many rights i think people should have.
leslie says:
November 30, 2010 at 9:48 am
The first right is we have the right to vote and elect a canadent.we should be able to vote because kids sometimes make better options.
The next right is we should be able to wear any kind of clothes to school.we should wear any clothes to school because or clothes is cooler.
The last right is we should all have a right that all mexicans should have the right to be in california.we should be able to live here because we should also need better opertunities.
topic:rights audience:Ms.Mercer keywords:inalienable,three,basic rights. The first right i think everyone should have is that they be treated with respect.The next right i think we should all have is that we all get more education/fun and less work.The last right all people should have is that kids should not get hit with belts or anything.
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Topic : Rights
Audience : Ms.Mercer
Keywords : research,basic steps
1.We have the right to vote
2.We have the right to drink out the same fountain
3.We have the right to where whatever we want
BY : Ashley
you can’t take away lunch time. learning time because you won’t learn anything.recess so we can have break time
Topic:Rights
Audience:A:Mrs.Mercer
Key Words:rights,basic inlaible
1.Everyone should be able to vote only 18 and up.
2.We have the right to remain silent until proven guilty.
We have the right to be treated equally.
Aarmon
(Topic)T:Rights
(Audience)A: Mrs.Mercer & Class
(Keywords)K:3 rights,explain,basic inaible
1.Should be able to work at the age of 14 and up
2.Kids should do what they want to do but wisely
3.Students at schools that has to use uniforms should be able to wear any kind of clothes
1.Should be able to work at the age of 14 and up(Big Idea)
-to be a privilege(T.M.M.)
-to help their family(T.M.M)
-to have money for them self(T.M.M)
2.Kids should do what they want to do but wisely(Big Idea)
-use their head before doing something
dumb
-Kids will always remember to be safe
3.Students at schools that has to use uniforms should be able to wear any kind of clothes
-dress with no gang signs
-no gang colors
– sometimes kids @ schools with uniform ,uses all of their uniform shirts
simple declarative:
there are three rights I think everyone should have.
Number:
Those are the three rights I think everyone should have.
Question:
What are three rights you think everyone should have?
Situation/Stance:
Although we kids aren’t free,if we were these are
the three things I would change.
There are three rights I think everyone should have.First,I think
any one should be able to work at the age of 14 and up,just to be a privilege.Also,to help their family,and to have money for themselves.
Secondly,Kids should do what they want to do but wisely.So,kids will use their head before doing something
dumb,and kids will always remember to be safe.
Lastly,Students at schools that has to use uniforms should be able to wear any kind of clothing.So kids won’t dress with no gang signs,
no gang colors,
sometimes kids at schools with uniform ,uses all of their uniform shirts.
Those are the three rights I think everyone should have.
Topic : Rights
Audience : Ms.Mercer & class
Keywords : research,basic steps
1.We have the right to vote
2.We have the right to drink out the same fountain
3.We have the right to where whatever we want
BY : Ashley
Ashley
everyone should have the same rights as the next person.
if one person has a right to do something and the other one doesn’t , that’s criticism .
do you think people should have the same rights ?
why would a person have a right and the other doesn’t ?
topic:rights
audience:Ms.Kuroda AND Class
keywords:rights
1.First I think that kids have the rights to vote.
2.Next kids should have the rights to drive car.
3.Last kids should have rights to do every thing and any the we wont without permission.
By KAMERON
1.First I think that kids have the rights to vote. Because we want to pick some that’s running for something
2.Next kids should have the rights to drive car.Because what if we have to go some where very important and our parents wouldn’t take us there
3.Last kids should have rights to do every thing and any the we wont without permission.Because grown ups can do things we cant do like we cant get jobs in till where 16
I think we have the rights to vote scents every one else can.I think we should have the right to drive cars to get to were we need to go.I think we have the rights to get jobs.And I think we should get to go any were we want
These are three reasons why we should have rights to do things.First I think that kids have the rights to vote.Because we want to pick some that’s running for something. 2.Next kids should have the rights to drive car.Because what if we have to go some where very important and our parents wouldn’t take us there.
3.Last kids should have rights to do every thing and any the we wont without permission.Because grown ups can do things we cant do like we cant get jobs in till where 16. Conclusion.
topic:rights I have a right to be free. I have a right to be safe.I have a right to be cleaned.I have a right to be
Topic:Rights
Audience: The class and the teachers.
Keywords: 3 rights, basic rights
1. The first right I think everyone should have, is to be able to vote
2. The next right we all should have is to be able to decide our own life decision.
3. The next right all people should have is to be able to do things on their own.
1. The first right I think everyone should have, is to be able to vote.
We should be able to vote because kid’s opinions could count too.
2. The next right we all should have is to be able to decide our own life decision.
We should be able to decide our own life decisions because what if your parent wants you to be something you don’t want to.
3. The next right all people should have is to be able to do things on their own.
I think kids should be able to drive on their own because they could learn no matter what age.
1. Simple Declarative;
There are some rights I think everyone should have.
2. Number Statement;
I know of some rights everyone should have.
3. Question;
What are the rights everyone should have to you?
4. Situation/Stance;
Everyone should have many rights.
There are some rights I think everyone should have. The first right I think everyone should have, is to be able to vote. We should be able to vote because kid’s opinions could count too. The next right we all should have is to be able to decide our own life decision. We should be able to decide our own life decisions because what if your parent wants you to be something you don’t want to.The next right all people should have is to be able to do things on their own. I think kids should be able to drive on their own because they could learn no matter what age.
Topic:Rights
Audience:Ms.Kuroda
Keywords:3rights,think inalienable
1.the first right that everyone should have is to be able to vote
2.the next right we should all have is to be able to live without having to worry about segregation
3.the last right all people should have is be able to wear anything we want to without being judged
1.The first right that everyone should have is to be able to vote.
They should be able to vote for president.
2.The next right we should all have is to be able to live without having to worry about segregation.
we should be able to go to school or work without being called out our raise in a bad way.
3.The last right all people should have is be able to wear anything we want to, without being judged.
everyone should be able to wear any clothes and color without people thinking they’re in a gang.
1.Simple Declarative;
Everyone should have some rights.
2.Number Statement;
I have three reasons why everyone should have some rights.
3.Question;
Do you think some rights are important?
4.Situation/Stance;
We really need to be free because everyone needs to live with freedom.
I have three reasons why everyone should have some rights.The first right that everyone should have is to be able to vote.They should be able to vote for president.The next right we should all have is to be able to live without having to worry about segregation.
we should be able to go to school or work without being called out our raise in a bad way.The last right all people should have is be able to wear anything we want to, without being judged.
everyone should be able to wear any clothes and color without people thinking they’re in a gang.Everyone should have some rights.
[topic]t:Rights
[Audience]A:Ms.Kuroda/class
[Key Words]3 rights,basic inlaible
1.The first reason is every cultures should be treated equally.
2.The next reason is they shouldn’t have to have different tables or water fountains to you to drink.
3.The last thing is that you could go where ever you want.
Topic:rights
Audience:staff,Mrs.Mercer
Key words:3 rights,basic and rights
1. Anyone should be able to be friend with anyone they want to be with doesn’t matter black or white.
2. Everyone should be able to do what they want to do.
3. Black or white it does not matter everyone should be threaded the same no matter what.
I think kids would be able skate in the park 1. The people make the play
structure to small
2.So kids can be more safe
3. So the big kids don’t hurt the kids.
The people make the play
structure to small. Anyone should be able to be friend with anyone they want to be
with doesn’t matter black or white.2. Everyone should be able to do what they want to do. Black or white it does not matter everyone should be threaded the same no matter what.So the big kids don’t hurt the kids.
first I think kids do have rights because they need to lern and also to be free
Topic:Rights
Audience:Class
Keywords:3rights,basic inalienable,learned
1.The first right is to be able to vote and elect a candidate.
2.The second right is not to wear uniform to school because everyone wears the same thing and everyone looks the same.
3.The last right is go to the bathroom and drink water without asking a teacher.
1.The first right is to be able to vote and elect a candidate.Kids should be able to vote so they can choose a good candidate.
2.The second right is not to wear uniform to school because everyone wears the same thing and everyone looks the same.
3.The last right is go to the bathroom and drink water without asking a teacher.So we don’t interuppt the while shes teaching.
There are some rights everyone should have.
There are 3 reasons of having rights.
What rights do you think are important.
Although having rights I feel like are rights should be guaranteed.
There are some rights everyone should have.
1.The first right is to be able to vote and elect a candidate.Kids should be able to vote so they can choose a good candidate.
The second right is not to wear uniform to school because everyone wears the same thing and everyone looks the same.
The last right is go to the bathroom and drink water without asking a teacher.So we don’t interrupt the while shes teaching.
Here are some rights kids should have.
t:rights
a:class
k:3rights,basic in labile
1. I think we should not wear uniform because it is boring to wear the same thing every day.
2. Second right i think we should have is better food at this school.
3. Last right I think we should have at this school is to be able to vote.
1. I think we should not wear uniform.
I think we shouldn’t wear uniforms because it is kind of boring to wear the same3 thing everyday.
2. Second right i think we should have is better food at this school.
I think that we should have better food at this school because some kids wouldn’t eat and they will get sick.
3. Last right I think we should have at this school is to be able to vote.
I think that we should be able to vote because I feel that it is not fear that we don’t.
1. I think we should not wear uniform.
I think we shouldn’t wear uniforms because it is kind of boring to wear the same3 thing everyday.
I think that we shouldn’t wear uniforms every day because moms are probably tired of washing uniforms every other day because they only give 2 for the school year.Anther reason why I think we shouldn’t wear uniform is because kids forget to wear them and they don’t so they always get in trouble .My last reason why I think we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because it is boring for us to wear the same thing every day.
2. Second right i think we should have is better food at this school.
I think that we should have better food at this school because some kids wouldn’t eat and they will get sick.
I also think we should get better food is because I myself get hungry during class and we hear that we are having something they don’t like.
3. Last right I think we should have at this school is to be able to vote.
I think that we should be able to vote because I feel that it is not fear that we don’t.
I think we should not wear uniform.I think we shouldn’t wear uniforms because it is kind of boring to wear the same3 thing everyday.Second right i think we should have is better food at this school.
I think that we should have better food at this school because some kids wouldn’t eat and they will get sick.
Last right I think we should have at this school is to be able to vote.
I think that we should be able to vote because I feel that it is not fear that we don’t.
Good ideas, but this is not yet a paragraph. You need to have a topic sentence at the beginning, and a conclusion at the end. The sentences need to flow together, and not be on separate lines. Please make sure to capitalize “i”.
Topic:Rights
Audience:staff Ms.Mercer
Key words:3rights,basic in labile
1.One right that we should have is not having to wear school uniform
2.We also need better and warmer foods
3.We also need more school supplies
T:Rights
A:class
K:research, basic steps
1.the school should wear a good colors not gang colors
2.Second kids should not be mean
3.I think its better we vote
Topic:Rights
Audience:Mrs Mercer and class
Key words:rights
Three thing that i think people could have the right to do are that the ladies should be able to vote,we have the right to drink out of the same fountain and and finally we have the right to do what ever we want
topic:right Audience:staff
Keywords:three rights can’t be taken away
1. first i think kids to vote
2.next kids should have the right to drive
3.to do ever think we wont
. first i think kids to vote
2.next kids should have the right to drive
3.to do ever think we wont
TOPIC:Rights
AUDIENCE:Ms Mercer
KEYWORDS:3 rights,inalienable
1. The first right I think everyone should have is the right to vote.
2. The second right that I think we should all have is care.
3. The last right I think we all should have is citizenship.
Topic: rights
Audience: Mrs kuroda
Keywords:
1. The first right I think everyone should have is for some of the people.
2. The next right I think we should all have is the people could be cleaned.
3. The last right all people should have is that they could be nice. by kyle
Topic:rights
Audience;staff Mrs.mercer
Keywords; 3 rights ,basic in labile
1.One right that we should have is not having to wear school uniform
2.We also need more school supplies
3.We have the right to where whatever we wan
1.One right that we should have is not having to wear school
Sum people don’t like uniform people don’t want to were uniform it old
2.We also need more school supplies
we need more basketball,paper, and pencil
3.We have the right to were whatever we want
we should be able to were what ever
we like
I think kid should have right to do anything
why do you think kid should have right
Here are many idea we should have right
They are many right when you have to ask
I think that we should not were uniforms because we will all look the same that why we should not were uniforms. Sum people don’t like uniform people don’t want to were uniform it old. Here are many idea we should have right
Topic:rights
Audience;Ms karoda
Keywords;3 rights,basic inlaible
1.The first right is we have the right to vote and elect a canadent.
2.The next right is we should be able to wear any kind of clothes to school.
3.The last right is we should all have a right that all mexicans should have the right to be in california
The first right is we have the right to vote and elect a candidate.
The next right is we should be able to wear any kind of clothes to school.
The last right is we should all have a right that all Mexicans should have the right to be in California.
Topic : Rights
Audience : Ms.Mercer & class
Keywords : research,basic steps
1.We have the right to vote
2.We have the right to drink out the same fountain
3.We have the right to where whatever we want
BY : Eduardo S.
1.We should have the right to vote.So we can have a better life.
2.We have the right to drink out the same fountain so we won’t go to jail
3.We have the right to where whatever we want to have a better life.
3.We should have the right to where
Topic sentence.We should have the right to vote.So we can have a better life.
We have the right to drink out the same fountain so we won’t go to jail
We have the right to where whatever we want to have a better life. We should have the right to where
Conclusion sentence.We should have the rights to vote.
1.I think people should have lots of money.
2.we should get more money for their lives to buy food and houses.
3.why do we need to have rules of the state?
4.their are some rights guarantee.
Topic:Rights
Audience:A:Mrs.Mercer
Key Words:rights,basicinaible
1.We have the right to vote
2.I have a right to be free
3.We have the right to where whatever we want