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Period 4 Poetry Publication

Dear Poets,

Read through the six poems from your English class. Select one. Type it in a word document. As you type, consider making slight improvements and revisions.

1. Reply to this post by publishing your poem. Prior to publishing, be sure it is free of spelling errors and that it is your best version.

2. Reply to your poem with a brief explanation of the choices you have made and describe what you hope your reader will notice  as a result of your choices.

3. Reply to at least two of your classmates’ poems by commenting on their choices, theme, tone, or structure.

Kind Regards,

Coey

p.s. If you are interested in having your poem published in a teen literary magazine, consider submitting your work to Teen Ink.

Period 2 Poetry Publication

Dear Poets,

Read through the six poems from your English class. Select one. Type it in a word document. As you type, consider making slight improvements and revisions.

1. Reply to this post by publishing your poem. Prior to publishing, be sure it is free of spelling errors and that it is your best version.

2. Reply to your poem with a brief explanation of the choices you have made and describe what you hope your reader will notice  as a result of your choices.

3. Reply to at least two of your classmates’ poems by commenting on their choices, theme, tone, or structure.

Kind Regards,

Coey

p.s. If you are interested in having your poem published in a teen literary magazine, consider submitting your work to Teen Ink.

CAHSEE Study Guide and Released Questions

Hey my people,

Thank you for being open to the experience of a CAHSEE practice. If you would like to review past exams and released questions, I have several links under the category “CAHSEE” on this page.

Just scroll down and find the links!

Kind Regards,

Mr. Coey

p.s. Try the vocabulary game, Free Rice. It is so addictive and you donate rice to help feed children!

Signal Phrases and In-text Citations

Dear students,

I hope you are well and healthy. If you would like to send me a draft of your research paper, you can email it to jccoey@gmail.com
Given my current flu symptoms, it would not be wise for me to return to school today. I hope to return on Tuesday!

Today we are working to avoid plagiarism, which is the act of intentionally or unintentionally using someone’s ideas as if they are yours.  Being a great researcher is often about giving credit where credit is due, even if large pieces of your paper have been quoted, summarized, or paraphrased. But how do you avoid plagiarism?

Look at this sample problem sentence:

 

  • Native American women value a deep spiritual connection to the environment.

What is the problem here? where did I find this? Who said it? Are these my ideas?

Let’s try adding a signal phrase, the most famous of course is ‘According to.’

  • According to John Smith, Native American women value a deep spiritual connection to the environment.

So this is better. We gave credit to John Smith. But we still don’t know when it was written or who John Smith is. Let’s try adding an appositive phrase to help define John Smith and let’s cite the year this book was written.

  • According to John Smith (2006), author of Pocahontas Is My Love, “Native American women value a deep spiritual connection to the environment.

So there you have it. For further explanation about this example, visit the OWL at Purdue University, which has a comprehensive archive of topics related to research.

Each of your in-text citations should follow this process so that you avoid plagiarism, which is a serious academic failing and could lead to reprimand or worse expulsion! Gulp!!!

Kind Regards,

Mr. Coey

Research a Local or Global Issue

Greetings 10th grade students!

Welcome to our class web site.  I hope you find it as stimulating and eye-catching as I do. Yesterday we brainstormed a list of issues which plague our community:

Littering

Homelessness

Crime

Global warming

Drunk driving

Texting while driving

Drug abuse

Gang violence

Video game addiction

Diabetes

Prostitution

Obesity

Food addiction

Equal access to college

Deforestation

Air pollution

Gas prices

Unemployment

Bullying

Sex trafficking

Fire suppression

Air quality

Flood control

Other means of transportation

Access to healthcare

Obesity

Racism

Equal access to college

Animal cruelty

In addition, we discussed the possibility of researching topics environmental and international issues, which can be found on these web sites:

http://www.nrdc.org/

http://sacpeace.org/

http://www.globalissues.org/

 

Begin researching your topic by using the Research Methodology and Source Evaluation approach described in the attached document.

At the end of class you should have at least two sources cited in your working bibliography.

Kind Regards,

Coey

Poetry Cafe

Poetry Café

Imagine that you have been invited to read one of your poems at the beatific Luna Café in downtown Sacramento.  Your friends and family members will be there and of course the regular customers who frequent the coffee shop.  The owner of the coffee shop, a friend of your family, has asked you specifically to discuss how you created your poem and the choices you made as you developed your poem into the great work of art that it is today.

You remember some of the sage words of advice from your former English teacher, Mr. Coey, and you prepare ideas in response to the questions he asked you to consider many years ago:

 

  1. What words did you carefully chose? Why? What effect are you trying to create with your word choice? What kinds of sentences, phrases, or clauses did you use?  Why?
  2. How did you develop your style?  What kind of mood (atmosphere) are you trying to create?  What kind of attitude, or tone, do you want us to hear? Why?
  3. Are there important figures of speech in your poem?  Why do you want to make those comparisons?
  4. How important is the form of the poem?
  5. How do you develop a theme or motif?

 

William Blake and other poetry resources

Hey Ujima!

Great work on your Socratic Seminar with William Blake’s two poems, “The Lamb” and “The Tyger.”  You asked insightful questions and showed creative exuberance, which is rewarding for all of us.

You might enjoy learning more about William Blake and his unusual poems.

Here are two links I would recommend:

http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/116

http://www.blakearchive.org/blake/main.html

 

Our next Blake poem is “The Poison Tree,” a deliciously sinister piece of writing.

Kind Regards,

Mr. Coey

The Creature’s Final Monologue

Wordle: Frankenstein's Creature

I used the text from the creature’s final monologue (the last two pages of the novel) to create this wordle image.  Do you see a motif?

Also, I want to commend each of you for providing insightful comments about the parent/child theme in the novel.  Way to go!

Enjoy your three day weekend and think about your presentation, which is next Thursday.

Kind Regards,

Coey