Which Is The Better Neighborhood?

First, type the first paragraph of your “Which Is The Better Neighborhood?” essay in a Word document.

Then, after you’re done, please copy and paste it in the comments section of this post.

95 Responses to “Which Is The Better Neighborhood?”

  1.   zang Says:

    hey man ur paragraph is so good i very very very very very very very very very very very very very like it.

  2.   ong Says:

    hey your essay is good i like it….

  3.   zang Says:

    hey nice one.

  4.   changm Says:

    hey chou i very like your essay because like you say they have a beautiful houses n have a tall tree too……..when we went there i saw a big house was beautiful n i saw a tall tree tooo…..i like your essay ……..thnx gtg… :)

  5.   deissy Says:

    My Neighborhood
    What neighborhood is better? I think Burbank is better than the 40’s. There is a lot of reasons why Burbank is better, but I think the most important are because schools are nearby and because in my neighborhood are more diversity.
    One of my reasons was schools are nearby, for example in Burbank neighborhood there are a elementary school 2 middle schools and 5 high schools. In the 40’s schools are very far.
    My other reason was because in this neighborhood there are more diversity and more languages for example Latino 23.8%, African American 25.1%, Asian 19.8%, and Pacific Islander 1.3%, in 95819 there are not too much diversity like in Burbank neighborhood.
    However some people think 95823 is not the better neighborhood because it doesn’t have big houses and because this neighborhood has a lot of gangs.
    This is wrong because to have a big house is not as important as have schools and stores nearby, and gangs are everywhere.
    Like I say Burbank is better than the 40’s because schools are nearby and more diversity.

  6.   me Says:

    nice nice….

  7.   k??? Says:

    nice man…..keep up a good work…

  8.   zang Says:

    hey yeng i like ur essay ko.

  9.   chou vang Says:

    nice paragraph i like it because u have lots of example ka keep up the good work!

  10.   ger Says:

    Your essay is nice because you talk that in 95823 have school nearby to your house so you can go to school quickly.

  11.   laura Says:

    i like your essay because i am agree whit you in that the 95823 is better than 95819

  12.   kia Says:

    no think neng i like your essay.

  13.   lue Says:

    good essay because it good write

  14.   sana Says:

    This is really good example because you are right sometime we don’t have ride and we have to walk to school or when sometime we bored at home we can go to park and play there

  15.   neng Says:

    Hi! lue i like your essay because is a nice paragragh and lot of thing in each paragragh bye.

  16.   Tri Says:

    hi neng your essay is good because i like your example is make me understand batter english?

  17.   ali Says:


  18.   doua Says:

    i like your essay cause you got some good word.

  19.   luis Says:

    hey pausini you have a good examples in your easy you have to write more because your easy it to short nop te creas i just playin jajjajjja

  20.   ong Says:

    ey ka i like yur paragraph because is nice…..

  21.   Truong Says:

    ZE your essay so better because a house nearby the school it is good to get sometimes parent’s don’t have time to take them to school they can walking school…… :D

  22.   deissy Says:

    hey Troung i like your
    essay i think u have a lot of important
    information :)
    very good JOB!!!!

  23.   vang Says:

    Do you know that which neighborhood is the best in this world? I think that 95823 is better than 95819.An 95823 including stores, school and many kind of stores that is nearby the streets. But in 95819 is not have stores nearby any streets.

    The stores are nearby any streets. And also have many stores. For example, food store, a clothes store and include many restaurant and 95823.The important that also have health service that nearby some streets. And easy to walking to buy something to eat or buy things to use at home. It has many an ethnic to this area 95823 because many people different countries come to live in 95823.

    School is also nearby everyone in area 95823.It easy to walking to school, than it easy to your parent drop you kids to school. It is have much school that is around of 95823 because everyone in 95823 is rich. It easy to walking from school to home because if your dad is busy than you could walking home. And some school nearby parks and parks are beautiful to in join play game at parks.

    Some people think 955823 is not the better neighborhood because it too much gangs and not big house. In 95823 there are some streets that are dangerous to walking at night. However, this is wrong because some people think 95819 is better than 95823.

    I believe that 958243 is the best neighborhood in this country. Also in clouding Buses nearby School and light rail, too. It has more diversity and more languages in 95823 because different people live in 95823. And too much parks in 95823. I think that 95823 is this best houses and it is beautiful neighborhood that I never see before when in came to us. In 95823 is beautiful neighborhood is this country.

  24.   chou vang Says:

    wth is dis? this is my paragraph why u copy put in ur …. tat is not good man …. tat is call cheat..

  25.   deissy Says:

    Alina i like your essay (:
    very good job!!!

  26.   doua Says:

    i like your essay cause you got some good thing.

  27.   k??? Says:

    nice man…..u paragraph is cool man…because is cool….

  28.   deissy Says:

    hey Laura very good job in your essay:)
    NICEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! … eaea!! =D

  29.   chou vang Says:

    hey man tat is short paragraph ahahh but nice keep up the good work man!!

  30.   juan Says:


  31.   deissy Says:

    hey Mr. Hernandez
    i like your essay NICE!!! :) :) :) :) :)

  32.   deissy Says:

    i like your essay!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

  33.   laura Says:

    i like your essay
    esta chido

  34.   chou vang Says:

    nice paragraph vang keep up the good work.

  35.   juan Says:


  36.   deissy Says:

    OK wandee i know you try your best
    other time keep practicing more
    NICE ESSAY! :) :) :)

  37.   zang Says:

    i like your essay man.

  38.   ali Says:

    i like your essay because is fune….

  39.   karen Says:

    Our School Neighborhood
    Do you know that our school neighborhood houses are not expensive? I think that our school neighborhood is better than the Fabulous Forties my reasons are that the houses are affordable and the grocery stores that sells your ethnic food are nearby.

    My first reason that I think our school neighborhood
    Is better then the Fabulous Forties because the houses are affordable, I have seen houses on rent and the houses don’t coast a lot also because my classmates and me did a research about our school neighborhood about 3 weeks ago and we found that the median rent is $602.

    My second reason is because the grocery stores that sell your ethnic food are nearby. If you want to buy food you can buy your food at foodmax the store is close to our school neighborhood also because you can go look at the computer what store are close.

    Some people say that the houses Fabulous Forties are better because the houses are bigger and prettier but I think that their expensive plus the stores are farther.

    Did you know our school houses don’t coast a lot? I think you should live on our school neighborhood because the houses are nearby because theirs store that sells your ethnic food are nearby and the house are not expensive.

  40.   ali Says:

    your essay is sso long i like that …..

  41.   kengyang Says:

    that cool man……………………. :)


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